Redacciones
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Ideas para redacción:
· Introducción:Nowadays (Hoy en día). In our society ( en nuestra sociedad). Today in our social structure (hoy en uestar estructura social.
· Desarrollo:
1-Ejemplos.
2-En cuestas /datos:As the recent surveys show
3-Ventajas y desventajas:
{on one hand {on one side {on the positive side
{on the other hand {on the other side{on the negative side
{I can show some advantages such as:
{But also there are some disadvantages such as:
Also (también): Too (al final), as well as.
But (pero): However, Nevertheless.
Because (por que): due to + sustantivo.
·Conclusión: To conclude (para concluir). In conclusión (en conclusión). According to the said before (de acuerdo con lo dicho anteriormente).
·Opinión personal:As for as I’m concerved. I think. In my opinion. From my point of view. As I see it.Redacción:personaje
In this essay I’m going to describe_____, who is my______ and I know (/her) since (/she) was a child. _______ who has an important role in our society due to (/her) charismatic personality. In conclusion (/she) looks younger than (she) is according to (/her) character (/she) is optimistic and full of life, so (/she) always gets (/her) objectives. Although (/she) is too ambitious (/she) is always helping people. Apart from that I have to say that (/she) is a great fighter and therefore never surrender. Sometimes (/she) post the tempers but (/she) is a good person to conduce I have to say that (/she) has a huge personality and sense of humour, although /he/she) has a bad memory. (/she) has the complexion of (/her) mother, but the character of (his/her) father. (/she) has (/short) hair, as (/blond) as the /sun). she) has a small nose but (/her) face is covered with specks. her) eyes are blue and big; as blue as the colour of the ocean and are always full of energy and vitality. but nobody is perfect although she is it.
Redacción modelo:problemas
·Introducción: In this essay, I´m going to talk about-----,because I think that it´s one of the most important problems in our modern society and we should try to face it.
.
·Desarrollo: The show the reality, it´s fair to comment the positive and the negative aspects of the theme to get a complete vision of it.
On the positive side, we can remark…
Whilst on the negative side the main problems live in…
·Conclusión: To conclude, I relieve that this problem can be avoiced or eliminated if all of us try to share our ideas and make a common effort to finish with the conflict.
·Opinión personal: As far as I´m concerned, we should be much more optimistic, if we wish to build a better world for the following generations.
· Introducción:Nowadays (Hoy en día). In our society ( en nuestra sociedad). Today in our social structure (hoy en uestar estructura social.
· Desarrollo:
1-Ejemplos.
2-En cuestas /datos:As the recent surveys show
3-Ventajas y desventajas:
{on one hand {on one side {on the positive side
{on the other hand {on the other side{on the negative side
{I can show some advantages such as:
{But also there are some disadvantages such as:
Also (también): Too (al final), as well as.
But (pero): However, Nevertheless.
Because (por que): due to + sustantivo.
·Conclusión: To conclude (para concluir). In conclusión (en conclusión). According to the said before (de acuerdo con lo dicho anteriormente).
·Opinión personal:As for as I’m concerved. I think. In my opinion. From my point of view. As I see it.Redacción:personaje
In this essay I’m going to describe_____, who is my______ and I know (/her) since (/she) was a child. _______ who has an important role in our society due to (/her) charismatic personality. In conclusion (/she) looks younger than (she) is according to (/her) character (/she) is optimistic and full of life, so (/she) always gets (/her) objectives. Although (/she) is too ambitious (/she) is always helping people. Apart from that I have to say that (/she) is a great fighter and therefore never surrender. Sometimes (/she) post the tempers but (/she) is a good person to conduce I have to say that (/she) has a huge personality and sense of humour, although /he/she) has a bad memory. (/she) has the complexion of (/her) mother, but the character of (his/her) father. (/she) has (/short) hair, as (/blond) as the /sun). she) has a small nose but (/her) face is covered with specks. her) eyes are blue and big; as blue as the colour of the ocean and are always full of energy and vitality. but nobody is perfect although she is it.
Redacción modelo:problemas
·Introducción: In this essay, I´m going to talk about-----,because I think that it´s one of the most important problems in our modern society and we should try to face it.
On the positive side, we can remark…
Whilst on the negative side the main problems live in…
·Conclusión: To conclude, I relieve that this problem can be avoiced or eliminated if all of us try to share our ideas and make a common effort to finish with the conflict.
·Opinión personal: As far as I´m concerned, we should be much more optimistic, if we wish to build a better world for the following generations.