What is your opinión about giving more power to students in schools

Opinión ESSAY

This is a very interesting topic because (Este es un tema muy interesante porque) _____ It is obvious that you can hear many opinions about it and none of them are wrong, so now I will give mine.
(Es obvio que se pueden escuchar muchas opiniones al respecto y ninguna es errónea, así que ahora daré la mía.)

Firstly, we have to consider that according to (En primer lugar, tenemos que considerar que) 

I also want to say that (

También quiero decir que)

Another important thing that should -

not be forgotten is (Otra cosa importante que no se debe olvidar es)

But we shouldn't forget that (Pero no debemos olvidar que) (solo si tiene algún contra)

To sum up and as far as I am concerned we should carry out effective measures to raise awareness about this issue so that we can create a better world to live in.
(En resumen, y en lo que a mí respecta, deberíamos llevar a cabo medidas efectivas para concienciar sobre este problema y así crear un mundo mejor en el que vivir) 

FORMAL EMAIL

From: /

To: /

Subject: /

Dear Sir/ Mr

..., 

I am writing to complain about a faulty product I purchased from your website on (fecha)

And the poor customer service I experienced while trying to resolvé this issue

According to your website the (producto específico)
was described as ( lo describes), but unfortunately, this was not the case, and it left me completely dissatisfied. 

//(Detalle sobre el problema)
Upon receiving the product, I discovered that it (describe el tema: que está roto, que no funciona bien→ did not function correctly).

I immediately

contacted your customer service on (fecha)

to report the issue. While I was assured that the matter would be resolved quickly, I have yet to receive either a replacement or a refund, which is extremely disappointing. 

//(El remitente espera que el destinatario solucione el problema)

I believe the information provided may be misleading. I would appreciate an apology and appropriate compensation for the inconvenience. I kindly request a prompt resolution, either through a replacement or a full refund. I look forward to your response.

(Despedida)

Your faithfully/ sincerely,

INFORMAL E-MAIL

Hey [Nombre],

How’s it going? I hope you’re doing well. I wanted to write to you about (¿Cómo va todo? Espero que estés bien. Quería escribirte sobre)  ______ (explica el motivo del email de manera general).

So, here’s the thing:

(Entonces, te cuento:) ______ (explica con más detalle la razón del email, añadiendo información importante o contexto).

Honestly, I felt (Honestamente, me sentí ) ______ about it because (al respecto porque) ______ (comenta cómo te sentiste respecto a la

situación o noticia).

But guess what? You won’t believe what happened next! (¡Pero adivina qué! ¡No vas a creer lo que pasó después!)  ______ (algo sorprendente o inesperado).

Anyway, that’s all for now. Let me know what you think! Looking forward to hearing from you soon

(En fin, eso es todo por ahora. ¡Déjame saber qué piensas! Espero tu respuesta pronto.) 

Take care,

[Tu nombre]